Dear Katherine Fugate(the writer of the screenplay for this movie)-
Overall, you story was mediocre. There were about ten stiorylines too many in this flick. Although it was nice in order to get a zillion famous people to participate in this production, the problem of underdevelopment of both characters and story was created by the overuse of storyline. I think the story between Ashton Kutcher's character and Jennifer Garner's character would have been sufficiant for a movie in and of itself.
Please consider addressing this problem in your next screenplay.
Sincerely,
Movie Alice
P.S. Taylor Swift is not an actress but a fine singer.
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